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2012-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Dear Teacher Kristel, A happy Friday! I am happy to have a new class with you. I didn't mean to make you shocked but I was just glad meeting you again :) Let me introduce myself to you. I am 27 years old in Korean age. I majored in International Relations and double-majored in Psychology in undergraduate school, and majored in Counseling in graduated school. I graduated this August and started working at Seoul National University of Education as a psychological counselor. Because this university is so small, I am the only staff who is in charge of counseling and guidance for students. My job is to help our students find their own way to live happier and healthier lives. I try to understand my clients' deep inner worlds, to make them clearly awared of themselves and to help them find appropriate solutions for their problems. I hope we have an active and intimate conversation every morning. These days I feel frustrated when I speak in English, so I need your big help. See you next monday!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Another surprising thing! You made your homework right away~~kkk Anyway, I was happy that I get to meet you again too! ^^ I was a bit surprised but I mean it in a good way... :) Hope you didn\'t misunderstand that! It\'s so cool meeting you again..Small world!kkk And thanks for doing the homework by the way! Don\'t worry I\'ll try my best to make you feel comfortable in my class so you won\'t feel frustrated! LET\'S WORK AND STUDY HARD TOGETHER!!! ^________^ Have a nice weekend~~ T.Kriste P.S.Kindly check the corrections I made for you. :) Dear Teacher Kristel, >>CORRECT!!A happy Friday! >>CORRECT!! I am happy to have a new class with you. >>CORRECT!! I didn\'t mean to make you shocked but I was just glad meeting you again :) >>I didn\'t mean to shocked you but I was just glad meeting you again :)Let me introduce myself to you. >>CORRECT!! I am 27 years old in Korean age. >>CORRECT!! I majored in International Relations and double-majored in Psychology in undergraduate school, and majored in Counseling in graduated school. >>I majored in International Relations and double-majored in Psychology in the undergraduate school. I also majored in Counseling in the graduate school. I graduated this August and started working at Seoul National University of Education as a psychological counselor. >>I graduated last August and started working at Seoul National University of Education as a psychological counselor. Because this university is so small, I am the only staff who is in charge of counseling and guidance for students. >>CORRECT!! My job is to help our students find their own way to live happier and healthier lives. >>My job is to help our students find their own way to live their lives in a happier and healthier way. I try to understand my clients\' deep inner worlds, to make them clearly awared of themselves and to help them find appropriate solutions for their problems. >>I try to understand my clients\' deeper worlds/thoughts to make them be fully aware of themselves and to help them find appropriate solutions for their problems.I hope we have an active and intimate conversation every morning. >>I hope we can have an active and intimate conversation every morning. These days I feel frustrated when I speak in English, so I need your big help. >>CORRECT!! See you next monday! >>CORRECT!!

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