essay for today.
학생이 쓴 원문
I'd like to write down the essay about my voluntary work we already talked.
I do the voluntary work in the school of the blind in once a week.
The title of this programe what I participate in is 'our sight'.
The group is made of 22 university students and 7 of them take a class.
Each volunteer take care of each student from elementary school to high school who is visually impaired.
Classes teach fine art to the blind. Especailly, there is photography class.
whenever I talked to my friends about this activiry, theyalways ask same question.
That is, how to teach the photo to the blind, so did I actually when I started this work.But just after I took participate in the first class, I change my mind. This is only prejudice about disabled people. They have same ability as normal just not having ability of sight.The blind have made their own images about world.
each button of camera has their own sounds. So we teach how to catch the images with these sounds.
강사 첨삭
Wow Ms. [Name],
I am very much impress on how you teach your student. Disabled people are actually smart. I once had a student who was a special child and it was very difficult for me to teach him but as time goes by, with patience and perseferance I was able to gain his trust. I am sure that you student will never forget you. See you tomorrow!
T. Sheela
I\'d like to write down the essay about my voluntary work we already talked.>>I\'d like to write down an essay about my voluntary work which we already talked about.I do the voluntary work in the school of the blind in once a week.
>>I do the voluntary work in a school for the blind once a week.The title of this programe what I participate in is \'our sight\'.
>>The title of this program that I participated was \" Our sight.\"The group is made of 22 university students and 7 of them take a class.
>>The group is made of 22 university students and 7 of them took a classEach volunteer take care of each student from elementary school to high school who is visually impaired.
>>Correct!
Classes teach fine art to the blind. Especailly, there is photography class.
>>The teachers teach fine arts to the blind and most especially there is photography class.
whenever I talked to my friends about this activiry, theyalways ask same question.
>>Correct!That is, how to teach the photo to the blind, so did I actually when I started this work.
>>That is, how to teach the bling in taking pictures. So, I actually started to work for this.
But just after I took participate in the first class, I change my mind.
>>But after participating in the first class, I changed my mind.
This is only prejudice about disabled people.
>> This is only prejudicing the disabled people.
They have same ability as normal just not having ability of sight.
>>They have the same ability like normal people except for not having the ability to see.
The blind have made their own images about world.
>>Correct!each button of camera has their own sounds.
>>Correct! ( Capitalize the first letter of your sentence)
So we teach how to catch the images with these sounds.
>>Correct!
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