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If you could be on the cover of any magazine, which would you chose and why? You mean, which picture of me would I choose? I'd like to choose several people who are inspirations to me not using my picture. Those who light a fire under me are enough to present myself. These kinds of person such as parents, professers and my school's seniors are very important in my life. Everytime I meet people I tried to find the bright side of him/he.And it is the bedrock of developing my charaters and myself. The other reason I choose people who gave me inspiration is that myself is not the one who succeed in my life as well as grow up in mental steadily. So I'm not suitable to be on the cover of any magazine.

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If you could be on the cover of any magazine, which would you chose and why?
You mean, which picture of me would I choose?

>> Do you mean, Which picture of mine would I chose?
I\'d like to choose several people who are inspirations to me not using my picture.

>> Instead of using my picture, I\'d like to choose several people who serve as my inspiration.
Those who light a fire under me are enough to present myself.

>> Those who guide me and those who give light to me are enough to represent me.
These kinds of person such as parents, professers and my school\'s seniors are very important in my life.

>> My parents, my professors and my school seniors are very important in my life.

Everytime I meet people I tried to find the bright side of him/he.

>> Every time I meet a person I try to see the good side of him/her.
And it is the bedrock of developing my charaters and myself.

>> And it is my foundation in developing my character and myself.
The other reason I choose people who gave me inspiration is that myself is not the one who succeed in my life as well as grow up in mental steadily.

>> One reason why I would chose people who inspire me is because without them I will not be successful in life.

So I\'m not suitable to be on the cover of any magazine.

>> So I am not suitable to be in the cover of any magazine.