essay for today

2013-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear T.Kristel, Sorry for missing your calls these two days. Now I am attending a workshop for counselors who work at counseling center in each university. It is held at Jeju island, which is the most favorable spot for tourists in Korea. It lasts until tomorrow. Therefore, before I arrived, I was really looking forward to having a good time here enjoying beautiful scenery even though I originally came here to study. But unfortunately, the rainy season has just started and I can see nothing because of a thick fog. You can guess how I am disappointed... Anyway I'm happy to leave my office legally(?) for three days! :)

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms.[이름]!! A pleasant Tuesday~~ Wow! You\'re in JEJU!! kkk Should I say, I envy you? kkk Anyway, keep your fingers crossed you might see a better view before you go home. You still have a day and a half remember? kkk Anyway, have fun and see you soon dearie! T.Kristel Dear T.Kristel, >> CORRECT!! Sorry for missing your calls these two days. >> Sorry for missing your calls for the past two days. Now I am attending a workshop for counselors who work at counseling center in each university. >> Now I am attending a workshop for counselors who work at counseling centers in each university. It is held at Jeju island, which is the most favorable spot for tourists in Korea. It lasts until tomorrow. >> It is held here at Jeju island, which is the most favorable spot for tourists in Korea. It will last until tomorrow.Therefore, before I arrived, I was really looking forward to having a good time here enjoying beautiful scenery even though I originally came here to study. >> Therefore, before I arrived, I was really looking forward to having a good time here like enjoying beautiful sceneries even though I have been here before to study. But unfortunately, the rainy season has just started and I can see nothing because of a thick fog. >> But unfortunately, the rainy season has just started and I can see nothing because of the thick fog. You can guess how I am disappointed... Anyway I\'m happy to leave my office legally(?) for three days! :) >> You can guess how disappointed I am... Anyway, I\'m happy that I leave the office legally for three days! :)

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