(Essay) Have you considered running your own business? What kind of business would you like to run?
학생이 쓴 원문
I just want to go company. I love stable and comfortable state. I think running business is dangerous and actually doesn\'t fit to me. But if I\'m rich and retire my job, then I want to set up a cafe. I love plant so I wanna fill cafe with plants. I don\'t like ceiling light so I\'ll turn off ceiling light and turn on table lamp. I\'ll always go my cafe.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Having a cafe is a good business idea but working hard for now is not bad idea either. Do what works best for you for now. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee
I just want to go company.
>>I just want to work in a company.
I love stable and comfortable state.
>>I love to be in a stable and comfortable situation.
I think running business is dangerous and actually doesn\'t fit to me.
>>I think running a business is dangerous and it actually doesn\'t fit to me.
But if I\'m rich and retire my job, then I want to set up a cafe.
>>But, if I will become rich and I will give up my job, then I will set up a cafe.
I love plant so I wanna fill cafe with plants.
>>I love plants so I wanna fill the cafe with plants.
I don\'t like ceiling light so I\'ll turn off ceiling light and turn on table lamp.
>>I don\'t like ceiling lights so I\'ll turn off them off and instead I will turn on table lamps.
I\'ll always go my cafe.
>>I\'ll always go to my cafe.
>>OR: I\'ll always be in my cafe.
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