ESSAY: Have you ever experienced culture shock? Explain.

Hello Kelly!  Thanks for this composition dear.

~T. Irene~

It\'s an interesting question!

>>> Correct.

I would like to talk about culture shock in my life.

>>> I would like to talk about experiencing culture shock.

I visited China with my families when I was a secondary school student.

>>> I visited China with my family and relatives when I was a secondary school student.

When I entered to a toilet in a park, I found that there were any doors each spaces.

>>> When I entered a public toilet in a park, I found that there weren\'t any doors between each toilet bowl.

The locals did not cared and did their business.

>>> The locals do not care about privacy and just minded their own business.

Suprisingly the park was located in Beijing, the capital of China.

>>> Surprisingly, the park is located in Beijing, the capital of China.

It was quite culture shock to me.
>>> It was quite a culture shock to me.
I acutually do not know whether the doors have made or not since it was an experience a long time ago.

>>> I actually do not know if the doors have already been installed or not since I had that experience a long time ago.

I strongly believe that many travelers had recommended to block each rooms to protect privacy.
>>> I strongly believe that many travelers have recommended the installation of doors to protect privacy. 
I really like China because of delicious foods and gorgeous sceneries.

>>> I really like China because of their delicious foods and gorgeous sceneries.

However, I do not have courage to use such a toilet now.

>>> However, I do not have the courage to use such toilets again.  

I think that it was old trauma to me.

>>> I think it was traumatic for me.

If new doors were appeared, I am likely to go the country.

>>> If I can see doors in there, I would probably consider going there again.

Because trip is always exciting.

>>> Going on such trip is really exciting.