ESSAY: Have you ever had any vaccinations against diseases?
학생이 쓴 원문
Immunization is the most effective and economic ways to prevent infectious diseases.
It is an important public health protection mechanism so many countries designate some vaccinations as compulsory.
Typical examples are polio, measles and smallpox vaccinations.
When I was young, I also received these injections.
I still have a vaccination scar on my left upper part arm.
Recently, as winter approaches, I consider taking a vaccine against influenza.
As my teacher Beth said a few days ago, \"Prevention is better than cure\".
강사 첨삭
Hello Jong Moo. Thank you for this. Vaccination is also mandatory in my country.
- T. Beth
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Immunization is the most effective and economic ways to prevent infectious diseases.>>> correct
It is an important public health protection mechanism so many countries designate some vaccinations as compulsory.
It is an important public health protection mechanism so many countries designate some vaccinations as compulsory.
>>> OR: It is an important public health protection mechanism so many countries made vaccination compulsory.
Typical examples are polio, measles and smallpox vaccinations.
>>> correct
When I was young, I also received these injections.
When I was young, I also received these injections.
>>> correct
I still have a vaccination scar on my left upper part arm.
I still have a vaccination scar on my left upper part arm.
>>> I still have a vaccination scar on the upper left part of my arm.
Recently, as winter approaches, I consider taking a vaccine against influenza.
>>> correct
As my teacher Beth said a few days ago, \"Prevention is better than cure\".
As my teacher Beth said a few days ago, \"Prevention is better than cure\".
>>> correct
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