Essay: Have you ever had problems sleeping? What did you do about it?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people had an experience that they could not sleep at night.
I also had such experiences, especially when I had concerns in my mind.
Fortunately, I have several remedies.
My first remedy for insomnia is that I take a shower with warm water.
If it does not work, as a second solution, I drink a glass of wine.
It helps the blood circulation, often driving me into sleeping.
- Caution 1: just one, not two or more!
My final remedy is reading a book.
In this situation, I prefer to choose difficult books such as \"Guns, Germs and Steel\" by Jared Diamond.
- Caution 2: Please do not read using a Laptop or Smartphone. Electromagnetic waves could disturb your sleep!
강사 첨삭
Hello Jong Moo. Thank you for this. Good tip! I should try doing this if I have a hard time sleeping, especially with the wine.
- T. Beth
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Many people had an experience that they could not sleep at night.>>> Many people had an experience where they could not sleep at night.
>>> OR: Many people had an experience of not being able to sleep at night.
I also had such experiences, especially when I had concerns in my mind.
>>> correct
Fortunately, I have several remedies.
Fortunately, I have several remedies.
>>> correct
My first remedy for insomnia is that I take a shower with warm water.
My first remedy for insomnia is that I take a shower with warm water.
>>> correct
If it does not work, as a second solution, I drink a glass of wine.
If it does not work, as a second solution, I drink a glass of wine.
>>> correct
It helps the blood circulation, often driving me into sleeping.
It helps the blood circulation, often driving me into sleeping.
>>> OR: It helps in good blood circulation and often driving me into sleeping.
- Caution 1: just one, not two or more!
>>> correct
>>> OR: But take note, you should drink just one glass, not two or more.
My final remedy is reading a book.
>>> correct
In this situation, I prefer to choose difficult books such as \"Guns, Germs and Steel\" by Jared Diamond.
In this situation, I prefer to choose difficult books such as \"Guns, Germs and Steel\" by Jared Diamond.
>>> correct
- Caution 2: Please do not read using a Laptop or Smartphone.
- Caution 2: Please do not read using a Laptop or Smartphone.
>>> correct
>>> OR: However, it is advisable not to use a laptop or a smartphone.
Electromagnetic waves could disturb your sleep!
>>> correct
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