ESSAY: Have you tried any local food in the US that you didn\'t like? If yes, what is it?
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I remember that I went to the Thai restaurant for the lunch when I was in Alabama. The restaurant was quite small and old near to the Army post where I studied. I was with my friend and we actually wanted to go to the other Thai restaurant where one of the manager on post recommended to go but unfortunately, that one was closed at that time. Any ways I ordered fried rice with shrimp and pineapple and my friend did Pat thai which is spicy noodle. We ordered them to go and I went back to my apartment. When I opened first It looked good and the amount of the rice was bit much that I could keep it and eat it for dinner too. But I got so disappointed, because It was too salty, shrimps seemed not fresh and rice had no juicy at all. It cost 12ish bucks but had no worth to eat. However I had to eat it since I had nothing to eat in my refrigerator. So I ate them for lunch and dinner, and I felt bad on my stomach at night. That was the worst meal I had had in U.S.
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Have you tried any local food in the US that you didn\'t like?
If yes, what is it?
I remember that I went to the Thai restaurant for the lunch when I was in Alabama.
>>> I remember I went to a Thai restaurant for the lunch when I was in Alabama.
The restaurant was quite small and old near to the Army post where I studied.
>>> The restaurant was quite small and old but it\'s near the army post where I studied.
I was with my friend and we actually wanted to go to the other Thai restaurant where one of the manager on post recommended to go but unfortunately, that one was closed at that time.
>>> I was with my friend and we actually wanted to go to the other Thai restaurant that the manager on post recommended but unfortunately, that restaurant was closed.
Any ways I ordered fried rice with shrimp and pineapple and my friend did Pat thai which is spicy noodle.
>>> Anyway, I ordered fried rice with shrimp and pineapple while my friend ordered Pat Thai which is spicy noodle.
We ordered them to go and I went back to my apartment.
>>> CORRECT
When I opened first It looked good and the amount of the rice was bit much that I could keep it and eat it for dinner too.
>>> When I opened, it looked good and there was a lot of rice that I could eat it for dinner too.
But I got so disappointed, because It was too salty, shrimps seemed not fresh and rice had no juicy at all.
>>> But I got so disappointed, because it was too salty, seems like the shrimps were not fresh and the quality of the rice was not good at all.
It cost 12ish bucks but had no worth to eat.
>>> It costs 12 bucks but it was not worth eating.
However I had to eat it since I had nothing to eat in my refrigerator.
>>> CORRECT
So I ate them for lunch and dinner, and I felt bad on my stomach at night. That was the worst meal I had had in U.S.
>>> So I had no choice but to eat them for lunch and dinner, and I felt bad on my stomach that night. That was the worst meal I had had in the U.S.
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