Essay homework (04/13)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Mike,
Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework.
It has been interesting to see that you use a different method in describing yourself. Analogies are the transportation arrangement of thought. They are being created a few times consistently, and it is through them we situate ourselves in the world. You\'ve done a great job on this assignment.
~Teacher Cathy
1. [bread]
bread is so delicious food because that can be made of various ingredients like cream, red beans, and fruit, etc.
>> Bread is so delicious food because that can be made of various ingredients like cream, red beans, fruit, etc.
2. [sky]
Sky has many faces.
>> The sky has many faces.
for example, happy face when sunny day and sad face when gloomy day.
>> For example, a happy face when it’s a sunny day and a sad face when it\'s a gloomy day.
3. [computer]
Computer can be anything and it also can make everything.
>> The computer can almost do anything and it also can make almost everything.
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