Essay Homework {12/23}
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I want to go to China, Hungare, Peru.
Because~~
China- I want to eat the bejing duck.
Hungare- I want to go to the hot spring.
Peru- I want to see the rainbow mount.
This contres are butiful!!!!!!
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I want to go to China, Hungare, Peru.
Because~~
>> I want to go to China, Hungary, and Peru because of the following reasons:
China- I want to eat the bejing duck.
>> China - I want to eat the Beijing duck. [The names of places are capitalized.^^]
Hungare- I want to go to the hot spring.
>> Hungary - I want to go to the hot spring. [Check again the spelling of Hungary.^^]
Peru- I want to see the rainbow mount.
>> Or: Peru- I want to see the rainbow mountain.
This contres are butiful!!!!!!
>> These countries are beautiful!. [Check again the spelling of countries and beautiful.^^]
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