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Question: what would you do if you were stuck somewhere on the weekend but there is a strom raging?
- If i suppose that i\'m in an island, I would enter somewhere as soon as possible and try to contact with my family. I think it\'s very important to be safe and inside.
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Hi [이름] [이름],
Thanks for finding time to provide a response to the homework given you:)
-Rachel
If i suppose that i\'m in an island, I would enter somewhere as soon as possible and try to contact with my family.
>> If I were stuck in an island, I would enter a shelter or find somewhere safe as soon as possible and try to contact my family.
I think it\'s very important to be safe and inside.
>> correct
>> It\'s very important to find safety first.
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