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2020-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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If you were to choose a dish to describe you, what would it be and why? I would like to choose the food \'samgyeopsal\' Samgyeopsal is a representative Korean dish. it\'s a section of pork. and it\'s a very common meal for koreans. you can find samgyeopsal relatively more cheaper than beef . We also usually eat samgyeopsal wrapped in lettuce. It’s more delicious if you add ssamjang*. and also it can be enjoyed with some alcohol which is called \'soju\' many people describe samgyeopsal like a korean barbecue because it\'s very easy and simple to explain but the true name is samgyeopsal. ∗ ssamjang : a mix of doenjang and gochujang

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름],

That was a great response to the homework you were given. I also think samgyeopsal suits you because you are easy to get along with, warm and likable. You don\'t discriminate people and you accept them for who you are, and I guess that is the great thing about you:) Thanks for being my student. ^ ^

-Rachel

I would like to choose the food \'samgyeopsal\'

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Samgyeopsal is a representative Korean dish. it\'s a section of pork. and it\'s a very common meal for koreans. you can find samgyeopsal relatively more cheaper than beef .

>> Samgyeopsal is Korean representative dish. It\'s a pork section and it\'s a very common meal for Koreans. You can find it anywhere and it is relatively cheaper than beef.
We also usually eat samgyeopsal wrapped in lettuce. It’s more delicious if you add ssamjang, and also it can be enjoyed with some alcohol which is called \'soju\'

>> correct

many people describe samgyeopsal like a korean barbecue because it\'s very easy and simple to explain but the true name is samgyeopsal.

>> correct

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