Essay homework on 19th,June
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Hi [이름]! ^^
I noticed that you changed your class time earlier today.
Anyhow, I\'ll talk to you on Friday ;)
- Blair
A: Private school and state school each have weakness and strength. For me, I can say that state school is good choice for my children.
There are some reasons. I\'m also from national school. Back in the days I was in elementary school, I were a one of shiest girl in my classroom. I was worried about everyday going to go school cuz I was not confident with doing together. Especially in our special day like class with family, every student should prepare the performance. My teacher and class leader were help me out, first time I could say only one or two vocabulary, later on I finally got my position owing to them. I realized that this is bright side of national school. It is focusing on together than individual, sometimes it would be enforcing kids to be totalitarianism but other side can learn the point why we keep doing together.
Private school and state school has its disadvantages and advantages. For me, I can say that the state school is a good choice for my children.
These are some of the reasons; I\'m also from a national school. Back in the days, I was one of the most shy student in our classroom. I was worried to go to the school everyday because I was not confident. Especially during the special days wherein families watch their children\'s performance. My teacher and my class leader helped me out. At first, I could only utter one or two words, later on I finally got my position owing them. I realized that it\'s one of the bright side of national school. It focuses on individuals sometimes it would enforce kids to be totalitarianism, on the other side, it helps us to keep it together.
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