ESSAY: Hot or cold? Which do you prefer most for these things: drinks, weather, clothes, men/women?

Hello Kelly!!  Thank you for your thoughts dear. ^_^

~ Teacher Irene~

If I have a chance to choose two options: hot and cold, I would like to pick hot.

>>> If I need to choose between hot and cold, I would go for something hot.

Since it is difficult for me to endure a cold, I prefer summer as well as hot drinks.

>>> This is because it is difficult for me to endure the cold weather. I prefer summer than winter and hot drinks rather than cold ones.

A good example of this is that I usually refrain from go outside in winter except in the case of working time.

>>> For example, during the winter season, I rarely go outside except during my work time. 

As a result of this, my friends often get together and visit me.

>>> Correct.

Besides that, even in summer, I always would order hot drinks.

>>> Correct.

>>> Besides that, even during summer, I always would order hot drinks.

Furthermore, I always prepare long-sleeved shirts in my bag since some stores run strongly an air conditioner in summer.
>>> Furthermore, I always prepare long-sleeved shirts in my bag since some stores run their air conditioner quite strongly during the  summer season.
When it comes to men/women, I actually can not understand what the question means.

>>> Now, with regards to men and women, I actually do not understand how hot and cold is related.

However, I really like warm or gentle guys.

>>> Correct.

Some people prefer those who are chic or with charisma but I sometimes feel scare and frustrate when I deal with them.
>>> Some people prefer those who are chic or with charisma but I sometimes feel scared and frustrated when I have to deal with them.
Unfortunately, because Korea has four seasons in a year, cold weather is destiny for me.

>>> Unfortunately, because Korea has four seasons in a year, cold weather is a common time for me.

Therefore almost every year, I would buy some clothes,gloves, and even blankets in order to ready the severe cold.

>>> Therefore, almost every year, I would buy some new clothes, gloves, and even blankets in order to get/be ready for severe cold temperatures.