ESSAY: How are teachers or professors expected to behave in your country?

2019-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Teachers are expected to behave as a role model of students. People think that teachers are diligent in general and have a sufficient knowledge about their field and try their best to guide students appropriately. In Korea, there is a proverb that king, father and teacher are equally important. Among three persons, the teacher is the main character of this proverb. We already know that a king is an essential person in a country. We also admit that a father is indispensable in a house. So, treating a teacher like as a king or a father reveals how much we respect a teacher here in Korea. There are another proverb related to a teacher, saying that \"do not step on the teacher\'s shadow\". It also discloses that Korean indeed esteems their teachers.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir Jong Moo. Thank you for this. A teacher is definitely a respectable and noble job.
- T. Beth
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Teachers are expected to behave as a role model of students.
>>> Teachers are expected to behave as a role model to students.   
People think that teachers are diligent in general and have a sufficient knowledge about their field and try their best to guide students appropriately.
>>>  correct 
In Korea, there is a proverb that king, father and teacher are equally important.
>>> In Korea, there is a proverb that says the king, father and teacher are equally important.  
Among three persons, the teacher is the main character of this proverb.
>>>  correct   
We already know that a king is an essential person in a country. 
>>> correct  
We also admit that a father is indispensable in a house.
>>>  correct 
So, treating a teacher like as a king or a father reveals how much we respect a teacher here in Korea.
>>> So, treating a teacher like a king or a father reveals how much we respect a teacher here in Korea. 
There are another proverb related to a teacher, saying that \"do not step on the teacher\'s shadow\".
>>> There is another proverb related to a teacher, saying that \"do not step on the teacher\'s shadow\".  
It also discloses that Korean indeed esteems their teachers.
>>> correct
>>> OR: It also implies that Koreans indeed value their teachers.   

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