Essay: How can you introduce yourself to strangers who don\'t speak your language?
학생이 쓴 원문
The First step is strangers feels make comfortable that factor is very important what i think
after that strangers have open mind too also.
The second step is approaching to strangers with a bright smile
and offer a little treat to strangers like snacks or drinks
finally now strangers and i ready for communication
we might use body language and each other might know good people.
I introduce my name with accent, index fingers
in such wise, we will find something in common
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Nice to hear from you.
Here are my corrections.
The First step is strangers feels make comfortable that factor is very important what i think after that strangers have open mind too also.
>> The first step is to make strangers feel comfortable. This is very important especially if strangers have open minds, too.
The second step is approaching to strangers with a bright smile and offer a little treat to strangers like snacks or drinks
>>The second step is to approach strangers with a bright smile and offer a little treat to them like snacks or drinks.
finally now strangers and i ready for communication we might use body language and each other might know good people.
>>Finally, I and strangers are now ready for communication. We might use body language to let each others know that we are good people.
I introduce my name with accent, index fingers in such wise, we will find something in common
>>I will introduce my name with accent, and find something in common.
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