Essay: How much would be the maximum amount you are willing to pay for a good meal?
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, the average price for a meal (lunch or dinner) is around 10,000 won (10 U.S. dollars).
However, some special meals such as Korean beef, Sushi and Western cuisine are expensive. More than 100,000 won are not rare.
Even though I am not a person who likes to have such expensive meal, I don\'t like to set the upper bound of a price for a meal.
If it has a high quality and appeals my appetite, I sincerely pay for it if it is affordable.
But, it requires one precondition.
I have to work diligently and save money enough to pay for the special treat.
High expense comes with great responsibility :-)
강사 첨삭
Hello JongMu. Thank you once again for this. Well, spending an expensive amount for a good meal would be good sometimes. It\'s a way of treating yourself after working hard. You deserve it. As long as it is within your budget, of course.
- T. Beth
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In Korea, the average price for a meal (lunch or dinner) is around 10,000 won (10 U.S. dollars).>>> correct
However, some special meals such as Korean beef, Sushi and Western cuisine are expensive.
However, some special meals such as Korean beef, Sushi and Western cuisine are expensive.
>>> correct
More than 100,000 won are not rare.
>>> Paying more than 100,000 won is not rare.
Even though I am not a person who likes to have such expensive meal, I don\'t like to set the upper bound of a price for a meal.
>>> Paying more than 100,000 won is not rare.
Even though I am not a person who likes to have such expensive meal, I don\'t like to set the upper bound of a price for a meal.
>>> correct
If it has a high quality and appeals my appetite, I sincerely pay for it if it is affordable.
>>> OR: If it is of good quality and appeals my appetite, I would sincerely pay for it if it is within my budget.
But, it requires one precondition.
If it has a high quality and appeals my appetite, I sincerely pay for it if it is affordable.
>>> OR: If it is of good quality and appeals my appetite, I would sincerely pay for it if it is within my budget.
But, it requires one precondition.
>>> correct
I have to work diligently and save money enough to pay for the special treat.
I have to work diligently and save money enough to pay for the special treat.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I have to work diligently and save enough money to pay for the special treat.
High expense comes with great responsibility :-)
High expense comes with great responsibility :-)
>>> correct
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