(Essay) How often do you skip breakfast or have it on the go?
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Hello Ye Ji! I agree with you. Breakfast is really important to keep our energy going for the day. I hope that you had breakfast to keep you going. Have a productive day!~~T.Dee
I usually have the breakfast on-the-go.
>>CORRECT!
I used to skip breakfast because i was always chased by the time to prepare going to the work early in the morning.
>>I used to skip breakfast because I was always chasing time to prepare going to work early in the morning.
>>OR: I used to skip breakfast because I always run out of time preparing to get to work.
However, i started to have the breakfast because my mom told me that having the breakfast is very important for our health.
>>However, I started to have breakfast because my mom told me that having breakfast is very important to our health. (Make sure to always follow the rules on capitalization. ^-^)
Even for now, having the breakfast everyday is very difficult task for me, but starting with the light refreshments such as salads and fruits makes it easier for me to have the breakfast.
>>Even for now, having breakfast everyday is a very difficult task for me, but starting with the light refreshments such as salads and fruits makes it easier for me to have breakfast.
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