ESSAY: How will you let other people stop labeling Koreans as to what they see on Kpop idols?
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I can say just being myself as usual so that It can change their mind. There is no specific way to convince many people labeling Koreans by what they have seen on media. Some of the features from the K-pop idols have already been a stereotype of Koreans because K-pop and K-drama is the only way for other people to watch us. And I have no way to fix this situation since I\'m not a famous person nor I don\'t have much influence compare to them. So just showing myself as a normal person as similar as others would be only one way I could do. First, people around me will find it out that K-pop idols are not usual Korean\'s characteristic. Soon it might be spread out to others and I believe there are many Koreans living in other countries and they may think and behave same as me, so eventually people will figure it out.
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How will you let other people stop labeling Koreans as to what they see on Kpop idols?
I can say just being myself as usual so that It can change their mind.
>>> I think just being myself as normal would change their mind.
There is no specific way to convince many people labeling Koreans by what they have seen on media.
>>> CORRECT
Some of the features from the K-pop idols have already been a stereotype of Koreans because K-pop and K-drama is the only way for other people to watch us.
>>> Some of the features from the K-pop idols has already been a stereotype of Koreans because K-pop and K-drama is the only way for other people to know about us.
And I have no way to fix this situation since I\'m not a famous person nor I don\'t have much influence compare to them.
>>> I have no way to fix this situation since I\'m not a famous person nor I don\'t have much influence compared to them.
So just showing myself as a normal person as similar as others would be only one way I could do.
>>> So just showing myself as a normal person as similar as others would be my only way.
First, people around me will find it out that K-pop idols are not usual Korean\'s characteristic.
>>> First, people around me will find out that K-pop idols don\'t have the usual Korean characteristics.
Soon it might be spread out to others and I believe there are many Koreans living in other countries and they may think and behave same as me, so eventually people will figure it out.
>>> Soon it can be spreading out to others and I believe there are many Koreans living in other countries and they may think and behave the same as me, so eventually people will figure it out.
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