Essay: How would your life be different without the Internet?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob!^_^
Happy mid-week (Wednesday)!
Thank you for sharing your insight regarding this topic.
I agree with you, we didn\'t have internet before but we managed to survive.
It\'s not a neccessity to be honest, but it\'s definitely a big help.
It made our lives easier in so many ways. :)
_T. Mayleen ^^
Actually, when I was on military service, I suffered that kind of situation without internet.
>> Actually, when I was in the military, I experienced that situation - - no internet.
At first, it is hard to adopt. But as time goes by, I did\'t think I need internet.
>> At first, it was hard to adapt or adjust, but as time went by, I didn\'t think I need it.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.