ESSAY: Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people

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These days, due to human activity, there are a variey of problems in our society.

>>> Correct.

The biggest one is environment problems such as fine mist and global warming and even extinction.
>>> The biggest one is environmental problems such as fine dust, global warming and even extinction of species.
Some people argue that human activiey is essential for human living.

>>> Some people argue that human activities are essential for human living.

For example of this, we can acquire woods which use to build house by cutting the trees.

>>> For example, we need wood to build houses and that means cutting of trees.

Furthermore, people need to run factories to make convenient objects even though the operation makes a lot of air pollution.
>>> Furthermore, people need factories to create convenient things even though the operation produces a lot of air pollutants.
In my opinion, people can solve the enviroment problem by reducing waste.

>>> In my opinion, people can solve the environmental problem by reducing waste.

It is hard to prevent productions, however, it is easy to recycle.

>>> It is hard to prevent production of materials however, it would be useful to recycle.

For example, when I was a childhood, my mother taught me conserve paper towels and water.

>>> For example, when I was a child, my mother taught me to conserve paper towels and water.

Besides that, sometime I played with second-handed toys from my cousin although my familiy was not poor.
>>> Besides that, sometimes I played with second-hand toys from my cousin although my familiy was not poor.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that development is important.

>>> Correct.

Nevertheless, modern people try to save the environment.

>>> Nevertheless, modern people should also try to save the environment.