ESSAY: If given the chance to interview your current president now, what would you ask?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I given the chance to interview my current president now,I would ask "Where are you born?"Then "What's your favorite food?" "What do you think the best people in the world?" "When you was young,what was your dream?" Lastly,I want to ask "What's your favortie movie?"
Movie time (Night at the Museum Secret of the Tomb)
A USA night guard Lali leave with president,monkey Dekster and cowboy to go to the England London museum.Because the gold slate is loose its power.The dinosaur
began to move.Lenslot take away the gold slate.Paor's son and monkey Deckster are diedSo,Lenslot give the gold slate to Lali.Then,Paor's son and monkey Deckster revive.Rari do a good job.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Happy Wednesday! How have you been doing?
I\'m very happy that you completed your assignment.Your questions were very interesting and engaging.
I wouldn\'t be surprised if the President became your friend once she answers your questions!
However, you have to brush up on your tenses and the correct usage of is/are/were.
I really enjoyed reading your write-up on movie night.
In fact, I enjoyed it so much that I want to watch it sometime this week!
I want to see Dexter the monkey because he seems like an interesting character.
Anyway, I can see that your English skills are improving, especially your ability to understand spoken English.
Continue to watch more English movies and i bet you\'ll get even better.
Can\'t wait to hear from you again!
See you soon!
-T. Liza
If I given the chance to interview my current president now,I would ask \"Where are you born?\"
>>If I were given the chance to interview our current president now, I would ask \"Where were you born?\"
>>OR: If I were given the chance to interview our president, I would ask \"Where were you born?\"
Then \"What\'s your favorite food?\"
>>CORRECT
>>OR: Then, I would ask \"What food do you like most?\"
\"What do you think the best people in the world?\"
>>\"Who do you think are the best people in the world?\"
>>OR: \"What kind of people are the best in the world?\"
\"When you was young,what was your dream?\"
>>\"When you were young, what was your dream?\"
>>OR: \"What was your dream when you were young?\"
Lastly,I want to ask \"What\'s your favortie movie?\"
>>Lastly, I want to ask \"What\'s your favorite movie?\"
>>OR: Lastly, I would ask \"What is your favorite movie?\"
Movie time (Night at the Museum Secret of the Tomb)>>CORRECT
A USA night guard Lali leave with president,monkey Dekster and cowboy to go to the England London museum.
>>An american night guard, Larry, left with the President, a monkey named Dexter and a cowboy to go to the England London Museum.
>>:OR Larry, an american night guard, went to the England London Museum together with a Monkey named Dexter, a cowboy and the President.
Because the gold slate is loose its power.
>>This was because the golden slate was losing its power.
>>OR: They went there because the golden slate was losing its power.
The dinosaur began to move.
>>The dinosaurs began to move.
Lenslot take away the gold slate.
>>Lancelot took the golden slate.
>>OR: Lancelot stole the golden slate.
Paor\'s son and monkey Deckster are diedSo,Lenslot give the gold slate to Lali.
>>Paul\'s son and Dexter the monkey died so Lancelot gave the golden slate to Larry.
>>OR: With Paul\'s son and Dexter the monkey dead, Lancelot gave the golden slate to Larry.
Then,Paor\'s son and monkey Deckster revive.
>>Then, Paul\'s son and Dexter the monkey were revived.
Rari do a good job.
>>Larry did a good job.
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