Essay in my facvorite movie
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Hi Gloria,
Thanks for sharing your favorite movie. I like this movie too! I like the story and the songs especially “Your Welcome”. It’s an interesting song and I like it.
-Teacher Ash
My favorite movie is moana, because her outlooking is alike as me, for example, her curly hair and healthy face.
>> My favorite movie is “Moana” because I look like her. For example, she has curly hair and a very healthy outlook in life.
Furthermore, I like the movie story that the little girl has exprienced the wonderful adventure with her friend.
>> I also like how Moana experienced wonderful adventures with her friend.
The movie was tought for me, value of friend, strongness of healty mind.
>> The movie taught me the value of friendship and having a healthy mindset.
So I like the movie.
>>That is why, I like the movie.
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