ESSAY: In your own way, how do you try to help in waste reduction?
학생이 쓴 원문
Waste is a serious problem in the world today.
According to the New Weeks, the total waste in 2016 was 2 billion tons and will be expected to surge to 3.4 billion tons by 2050.
To reduce this increasing, many countries and organizations propose various solutions and ideas such as a recycling bin and separate collection.
Personally, I do two things to participate in such effort.
First, I usually bring my own tumbler.
In the beginning, I bring it to keep my coffee in a warm condition.
But, these days I use it not only for coffee but also for water and other drinks, which makes it possible for me to avoid using disposable one-time cups.
Second, I try to escape impulsive buying.
The stuff that I purchase without any plan frequently turns out useless in the near future and eventually becomes a waste.
I think \"less buying, less wasting\".
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir Jong Moo. Thank you for this. As humans living in this planet, we do have a responsibility to take care of it.
- T. Beth
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Waste is a serious problem in the world today.>>> correct
According to the New Weeks, the total waste in 2016 was 2 billion tons and will be expected to surge to 3.4 billion tons by 2050.
According to the New Weeks, the total waste in 2016 was 2 billion tons and will be expected to surge to 3.4 billion tons by 2050.
>>> correct
To reduce this increasing, many countries and organizations propose various solutions and ideas such as a recycling bin and separate collection.
To reduce this increasing, many countries and organizations propose various solutions and ideas such as a recycling bin and separate collection.
>>> To reduce this from increasing, many countries and organizations propose various solutions and ideas such as a recycling bin and separate collection.
>>> OR: To reduce this increase, many countries and organizations propose various solutions and ideas such as a recycling bin and separate collection.
Personally, I do two things to participate in such effort.
>>> correct
First, I usually bring my own tumbler.
First, I usually bring my own tumbler.
>>> correct
In the beginning, I bring it to keep my coffee in a warm condition.
In the beginning, I bring it to keep my coffee in a warm condition.
>>> correct
>>> OR: At first, I bring it to keep my coffee warm.
But, these days I use it not only for coffee but also for water and other drinks, which makes it possible for me to avoid using disposable one-time cups.
>>> correct
Second, I try to escape impulsive buying.
Second, I try to escape impulsive buying.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Second, I try to avoid impulsive buying.
The stuff that I purchase without any plan frequently turns out useless in the near future and eventually becomes a waste.
The stuff that I purchase without any plan frequently turns out useless in the near future and eventually becomes a waste.
>>> correct
I think \"less buying, less wasting\".
I think \"less buying, less wasting\".
>>> correct
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