ESSAY: Is internet shopping good? What are the best buys you have gotten from online shopping? What

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~ Teacher Irene~

These days, due to advanced technology, it is possible to search or shopping on the internet.

>>> These days, due to advance technology, it is possible to search or shop on the internet.

Furthermore, numerous online shopping malls have being occured.
>>> Furthermore, numerous online shopping sites (malls) are being opened. 
When I was an university student, I bought a white dress with a small belt and glitters for my graduation party online shopping mall.

>>> When I was an university student, I bought a white dress with a small belt and glitters for my graduation party from an online shopping site.

It was much more nice quality than I thought, and suitable for me.

>>> It was of a nice quality than I thought, and it quite suited me.

Besides that, it was on sale, so I can buy reasonable price.
>>> Moreover, it was on sale so I bought it at a reasonable price.
When it comes to notify a worst item that I was bought on the internet, I would like to talk about swimsuit, which I bought last year.

>>> When it comes to the worst item that I bought from the internet, it was the swimsuit which I bought last year.

Because the swimsuit was different with pictures and was not great quality.

>>> This is because the swimsuit was different from the pictures I saw and was not of great quality.

Also, it was too heavy in the pool, so I can not enjoy swimming well.
>>> It also felt too heavy when soaked in the pool so I didn\'t enjoy swimming because of it.
As a result of this, I make some rules about online shopping.

>>> As a result of this, I made some rules about online shopping.

The first one is that identifying the ingredient.

>>> The first one is like identifying the ingredient.

It can help you to get nice clothes.

>>> This can actually help you get nice clothes online.

Another way is comparing with other sites which sell same item.

>>> Another way is by comparing the same item from different online sites.

Even though it sometimes bother you, but you may find the way for discount.

>>>  Even though it may sometimes be bothersome, you may find a way to get a discount.