(Essay) Is it better to travel by airplane or by cruise ship? Why?

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I think it depends on your traveling style in choosing which transportation that you would like to take.

>>I think it depends on your traveling style when choosing which transportation you would like to take.

Airplane, for example, is definitely faster than cruise ship and can reach to the destination in a shorter time.

>>CORRECT!

However, cruise ship has various advantages like fancy restaurant, party, and beautiful sceneries.

>>However, cruise ship has various advantages like a fancy restaurant, an in-house party, and beautiful sceneries.

Hence, for people who would like to reach to the destination quickly and save their travel time, then airplane would be the good choice.

>>CORRECT!

While others who prefer the luxurious service can choose to travel by curise ship.

>>The others who prefer the luxurious service, can choose to travel by cruise ship.

>>OR: Hence, for people who would like to reach their destination quickly and  save their travel time, an airplane would be the good choice while for others who prefer the luxurious service can choose to travel by cruise ship. (The use of \"while\" as a conjunction should show the comparison or the contrasting ideas in one sentence. )