Essay: Is there something that you’ve dreamed of doing for a long time? Why haven’t you done it
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes i dreamed go to aboard for a long time
Because i always curious about they actual live in opposite of earth
Sometimes i think about “Am i deceived for everyone?
It’s likes The Truman show movie
So i want to proof this hypothesis to directly
But this plan need to a lot of money and time
As a result i have to get a job and earned money.
moreover i have a terrible speak in English
If i go to aboard somewhere and i have to proof hypothesis to someone in english
But I can’t
That’s why i study english
And the day is coming almost
I must have adventure whole world
that’s i’m dreamed
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>>Yes, I have been dreaming to go abroad for a long time.
Because i always curious about they actual live in opposite of earth
Because i always curious about they actual live in opposite of earth
>>Because I am always curious about how they live in other countries.
Sometimes i think about “Am i deceived for everyone?
Sometimes i think about “Am i deceived for everyone?
>>Sometimes, I ask myself , \"Am I different from everyone\"?
It’s likes The Truman show movie
It’s likes The Truman show movie
>>It is like \'The Truman\' movie.
So i want to proof this hypothesis to directly
So i want to proof this hypothesis to directly
>>So I want to prove this by myself.
But this plan need to a lot of money and time
But this plan need to a lot of money and time
>>But this plan needs a lot of money and time.
As a result i have to get a job and earned money.
As a result i have to get a job and earned money.
>>As a result, I have to get a job and earn money.
moreover i have a terrible speak in English
moreover i have a terrible speak in English
>>Moreover, I am not fluent in English.
If i go to aboard somewhere and i have to proof hypothesis to someone in english
If i go to aboard somewhere and i have to proof hypothesis to someone in english
>>If I go abroad, I will be able to improve my English skills by communicating with other people.
But I can’t.
But I can’t.
>>correct
That’s why i study english
That’s why i study english
>>That\'s why I study English.
And the day is coming almost
And the day is coming almost
>>And it is almost near.
I must have adventure whole world
I must have adventure whole world
>>I must explore the world.
that’s i’m dreamed
that’s i’m dreamed
>>That is my dream.
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