Essay: Is your country a safe country?

Yes, I'm sure South Korea is a safe country.(but North Korea isn't as you know.)^^ My experience proves that my country is safer than others. When I was in New York, Canada, India , France and so on, I couldn't go out at nigtht after 9p.m. and I was always worried about terror attacks and horrible pickpockets while traveling. However, I have not felt that way in my country. I read a survey foreign visitors to Korea conducted in newspaper and they said that South Korea has a good public security. So, they were able to get around and enjoy traveling until late night and it made visitors have unforgettable moments in traveling Korea. Therefore, I think South Korea is a safe country.^^

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the essay today. Keep up the good work.^^ Enjoy the rest of your day! ~Kelly^^ Yes, I\'m sure South Korea is a safe country. >> Correct. (but North Korea isn\'t as you know.)^^ >> (but North Korea isn\'t, as you already know.)^^My experience proves that my country is safer than others. >> My experience proves that my country is safer than other countries. When I was in New York, Canada, India , France and so on, I couldn\'t go out at nigtht after 9p.m. and I was always worried about terror attacks and horrible pickpockets while traveling. >> When I visited other places like New York, Canada, India , France and so on, I could not go out after nine [9] p.m. I was always worried about terrorist attacks and horrible pickpockets while traveling. However, I have not felt that way in my country. >> Correct. I read a survey foreign visitors to Korea conducted in newspaper and they said that South Korea has a good public security. >> I read a newspaper survey conducted by foreign visitors that the public security in South Korea is good. So, they were able to get around and enjoy traveling until late night and it made visitors have unforgettable moments in traveling Korea. >> So, they were able to get around and enjoyed traveling until late night and had unforgettable moments in Korea.Therefore, I think South Korea is a safe country.^^ >> Correct.