Essay (Jan 14th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
If you win the lottery, what\'s the first thing you will do?
>>> It depends on the amount of money I would get.
If I get more than 1 million dollars. I want buy super car, Lamborghini Aventador. I\'s always been my first dream to have the car!
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
You must love cars! Well, it is actually very nice to have a super expensive and great car once in our life.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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It depends on the amount of money I would get.
>> Correct!
If I get more than 1 million dollars. I want buy super car, Lamborghini Aventador.
If I get more than 1 million dollars. I want buy super car, Lamborghini Aventador.
>> If I get more than 1 million dollars. I want to buy a super car, Lamborghini Aventador.
I\'s always been my first dream to have the car!
>> Correct!
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