Essay (Jan 21th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have many disasters in your country which are caused by weather?
>>Yes, we have a few. But they are not that much serious ones as to being called \'disaster\'.
We, in Korea, have 4 distint seasons.
In the spring and in the Fall, the fine dusts generated by the industrial cities in China and in Korea sweep through the whole country. Fortunately, we had worn masks well because of the fine dusts before the COVID-19 started to frighten the world. That is why we could deal with the spread of the virus at an early stage, earlier than other countries.
In the Summer, people living in few cities suffer from flood because of the rainfall period of the year.
And in Winter, people living in the north part of the country have always had a hard time walking and driving because it snows a lot.
Q) When writing a season, which one is correct?
1) In Winter 2) In the Winter
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing and answering the given question!
Here\'s an answer to your question:
>> Both are actually correct! We can use \"In Winter\" if you are talk about the season in general and \"In the Winter\" if you are talking about a particular time or specific time in winter.
For Example:
In Winter ~ The people in our country always look forward for the first snow in winter. (In general)
In the Winter ~ We went to my aunt\'s place in the winter of last year. (Specific time)
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Yes, we have a few. But they are not that much serious ones as to being called \'disaster\'.
>> Yes, we have a few, but they are not that much serious as to be called a \"disaster\".
We, in Korea, have 4 distint seasons.
>> We, in Korea, have 4 distinct seasons
In the spring and in the Fall, the fine dusts generated by the industrial cities in China and in Korea sweep through the whole country.
In the spring and in the Fall, the fine dusts generated by the industrial cities in China and in Korea sweep through the whole country.
>> In Spring and in Fall, the fine dusts generated by the industrial cities in China and in Korea sweep through the whole country.
Fortunately, we had worn masks well because of the fine dusts before the COVID-19 started to frighten the world.
>> CORRECT!
That is why we could deal with the spread of the virus at an early stage, earlier than other countries.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
In the Summer, people living in few cities suffer from flood because of the rainfall period of the year.
>> In Summer, people living in few cities suffer from floods because of the rainfall period of the year.
And in Winter, people living in the north part of the country have always had a hard time walking and driving because it snows a lot.
And in Winter, people living in the north part of the country have always had a hard time walking and driving because it snows a lot.
>> CORRECT!
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