Essay (Mar 2th, 2022)
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Do you think people have less goals as they get older?
>>Yes. In most cases, they do, especially since they get married. Even though they have big dreams and goals when young, the marriage gives them a huge responsibility for their family. Whatever they thought they would do, they have to put the life with family first after marriage.
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Hi, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about it!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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Yes. In most cases, they do, especially since they get married.
>> Correct!
Even though they have big dreams and goals when young, the marriage gives them a huge responsibility for their family.
>> Even though they have big dreams and goals when they were young, the marriage gives them a huge responsibility for their family.
Whatever they thought they would do, they have to put the life with family first after marriage.
>> Correct!
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