Essay) Modern lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do

There are many things changed after industrialization and mordernization of society. Compared before that, people's life is much enrich and but there are both good and bad points in modern lifestyle. In my opinion, the modern life style means kids doesn't have much time with their parents. I believe that the expenses of bringing kids is the most major reason. I've seen an article and it said that the average parents spend one million dollar to raise a child. To make more money, parents have to work harder and spend their time at work. Another reson is education program for kids. Parents want their kids do better for everything. When the children are in elementary school, they should learn piano, ballet, or taekwondo, swim. If the children enter the high school, they have to prepare to go the university. Even if they finally enter the university, they keep studying to get a job. I think to be with kids is the good way to express their love and parents also could be good teacher.

Hello [이름], Well done! Please have sometime to read my corrections. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. See you! T. Sheela There are many things changed after industrialization and mordernization of society. >>There are many things that changed after industrialization and mordernization of society. Compared before that, people\'s life is much enrich and but there are both good and bad points in modern lifestyle. >>Compared before, people in this generation are richer but there are both good and bad points in modern lifestyle. In my opinion, the modern life style means kids doesn\'t have much time with their parents. >>In my opinion, the modern life style means kids doesn\'t have much time to spend with their parents.I believe that the expenses of bringing kids is the most major reason. >>I believe that the expenses in raising kids is the most major reason. I\'ve seen an article and it said that the average parents spend one million dollar to raise a child. >>Correct! To make more money, parents have to work harder and spend their time at work. >>To make more money, parents have to work hard and spend more time at work.Another reson is education program for kids. >>Another reson is the education program for kids. Parents want their kids do better for everything. >>Parents want their kids do better in everything. When the children are in elementary school, they should learn piano, ballet, or taekwondo, swim. >>While their children are still in elementary school, they should learn piano, ballet, taekwondo, or swimming. If the children enter the high school, they have to prepare to go the university. >>If their children enters  high school, they have to prepare to go to university. Even if they finally enter the university, they keep studying to get a job. >>Even if they are studying in a university, they have to keep on studying to get a job.I think to be with kids is the good way to express their love and parents also could be good teacher. >>I think being with their kids is the good way to express their love. Parents could also be good teacher.