ESSAY: Online, people write product reviews and opinions about services. Is it a good thing or bad t
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Some people argue that if we believe solely the reviews and opnions, we are likely to be deceived from them.
>>> Some people argue that if we believe solely on product reviews and other people\'s opinions, we are likely to be deceived by them.
Because someone who receive commissions or have sponsors would be able to creat false reviews.
>>> Because someone who receives commissions or sponsorships may be able to create false reviews.
To give an example, my friend who bought a cosmetic product from a named person who is connected with cosmetic company has been suffering from skin trouble.
>>> To give an example, my friend who bought a cosmetic product from an acquaintance who is connected with the cosmetic company has been suffering from skin troubles/allergies/reactions.
She has been regreted trusting these reviews.
>>> She regret trusting those reviews.
That\'s why people concern about the experience of products.
>>> I do agree that people should be concerned about product experiences.
However, some people hole the view that reading product reviews is necessary for leads to purchase successfully.
>>> In some cases too, people use these reviews for decision making, or whether to buy or not.
In other words, there is a strong relation between individual\'s opinions and successful consume.
>>> In other words, there is a strong relationship between individual opinions and successful consumption.
A lot of reviews help people compare each products\'s reality before purchasing and achieve satisfied consume.
>>> These reviews allow people to company products thus may result to a purchase or a sale because of a satisfied customer\'s feedback.
For instance, those people who are interested in clothes consider almost same conditions, so the potential buyers are able to choose easily.
>>> For instance, those people who are interested in clothes can compare and choose from different selections. This I think will increase customer satisfaction.
Besides that, consumers are able to consider the products a real point
>>> Besides that, consumers are able to see the product\'s good points.
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