essay part 1

I believe that we can learn more from mistakes than from successful actions. Most of all, mistakes keep us from making the same mistake again. For example, when I was a small child, I wanted to grab everything I saw, just like other curious children. However, when I touched a hot kettle, I got a burn, and since then I became very careful when touching something. In this way, I learned from the mistake I made, which have protected me from various risk factors since then.

Hi there Lois! (^_^) How\'s your day going so far? Thank you for writing in our composition board. I enjoyed reading about your opinion in relation to our topic. You have really nice sentences. Good job! In my opinion, success is a very bad and lousy teacher. People don\'t usually learn much when they succeed all the time. Failure on the other hand is the most brutal yet the best teacher because it forces you to learn. It forces you to analyze and reflect about your actions, your mistakes and your shortcomings. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again on Friday. ^^ ~Teacher Charry (^_^) I believe that we can learn more from mistakes than from successful actions. >> CORRECT! OR >> I believe that we can learn more from our mistakes than from our success. Most of all, mistakes keep us from making the same mistake again. >> CORRECT! OR >> Most of all, our mistakes keep us from doing the same mistakes again. For example, when I was a small child, I wanted to grab everything I saw, just like other curious children. >> CORRECT! OR >> For example, when I was a small child, I wanted to grab everything I saw, just like most children do. However, when I touched a hot kettle, I got a burn, and since then I became very careful when touching something. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, when I touched a hot kettle, I acquired a burn injury and since then I became more careful when touching things. In this way, I learned from the mistake I made, which have protected me from various risk factors since then. >> CORRECT! OR >> The mistake I made, gave me a lesson I will never forget and has protected me from being reckless since then.