ESSAY: Please explain, \"In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence
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Martin was activist that fight for civil right and racism.
>> Martin Luther was an activist who fought for civil rights and against racism.
so we must understand what he done, what it happen
>> So we must understand what he\'s done and what happened.
60\'s in America it was totally chaos that conflict from racism and war
>> 60\'s in America was a total chaos with conflicts from racism and war.
everywhere cause fight each other that split black and white
>> There was fight everywhere that split black and white.
people don\'t want to fight anymore, because they are really sick of this problem and furthermore affected zeitgeist.
>> People didn\'t want to fight anymore, because they were sick of this problem, furthermore, it affected the zeitgeist.
nevertheless normal citizen keep their life quietly.
>>Nevertheless, normal citizens kept their life quietly.
the reason is they don\'t want to be damaged to everything.
>> The reason is they didn\'t want to damage everything.
they just want to live normal like other people.
>> They just want to live a normal life like other people.
So if I scream for unfairness or inequality, I also my family or my neighbor will target by their hate
>> So if I scream about unfairness or inequality, my family or my neighbors will be targeted by their hatred.
so what can they do? they couldn\'t see that situation
>> So what can they do? They don\'t see those kinds of situations.
And martin might knew that atmosphere and maybe he as well knew than anybody.
>> And Martin might know about that atmosphere as well as everybody.
but also he knew if we keep silence, we have to lose it all what we have Right
>> But he also know that if we continue to be silent, we might lose our rights.
So he decided move on, even though situation hard to scream
>> So he decided to move on, even though in his situation it was hard to scream.
In the end, we know it\'s more painful seeing miserable appearance behind than bothering by words
>> In the end, we know that it\'s more painful to see miserable appearances then being bothered by words.
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