ESSAY: Please explain \"Prevention is better than cure\".
학생이 쓴 원문
This proverb is applied for everything
The world we live, it has a rule.
That is Time can\'t rewind never
Sometimes we have many experience lose, break, sick and die
Time sometimes solve problem or take away all from us And We are desire to go back to that it happened before
But we can\'t. We can’t do anything
We just a weak human
when we lost something or someone for precious, we will broke down.
More or less, and definitely we will regret for everything and even myself.
But we always do, even though we knew that this simple rule, we couldn\'t see beyond one\'s nose.
So we have to do anything and remind for prevention
And we have to try to not happened cure before.
강사 첨삭
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Interesting points today, [이름] [이름].
I am impressed with how expressive you are on this.
Good job!
~Teacher Eve.
This proverb is applied for everything
>> This proverb is applied to everything.
The world we live, it has a rule.
>> Correct!
That is Time can\'t rewind never
>> That is about how we can never rewind time.
Sometimes we have many experience lose, break, sick and die
>> Sometimes we have many experiences to lose, break, be sick and die.
Time sometimes solve problem or take away all from us And We are desire to go back to that it happened before
>> Time, sometimes solve problems or take it all away from us, and we desire to go back to how it used to be.
But we can\'t. We can’t do anything
>> But we can\'t, we can\'t do anything.
We just a weak human
>> We\'re just weak humans.
when we lost something or someone for precious, we will broke down.
>> When we lose something or someone precious, we break down.
More or less, and definitely we will regret for everything and even myself.
>> More or less, we regret everything even for ourselves.
But we always do, even though we knew that this simple rule, we couldn\'t see beyond one\'s nose.
>> But we always do, even if we know of this simple rule, we could not see beyond one\'s nose.
So we have to do anything and remind for prevention
>> So we have to do everything and remind ourselves for prevention.
And we have to try to not happened cure before.
>> And we have to try to not have cure before anything happens.
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