Essay: prefer to work alone or as a team member

2013-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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This question seems to be the one that a person receives when he/she has a job interview. The correct answer to the question is “I prefer working in a team and I am a team oriented person”, which is commonly expected by an employer. This is because when you work at a company, you have to work with others and it’s true that there is no work or job which doesn’t need team work. You are not able to achieve company’s goals by working alone without supports from others. For example, in order to launch a new product, many stakeholders are involved: product planning, engineering, manufacturing, marketing, sales, PR, aftersales, etc. All functions and related people should closely work together and cooperate each other for the flawless launch. However, being honest, I feel much comfortable and productive when I work independently. I like working hard, pursuing the perfectness, holding myself accountable for what I do without blaming others, and enjoying the feeling of the accomplishment

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Thank you for sending this in.^^ You were able to explain your thoughts well. Working in a company deals with a lot of tasks and some of them are assigned to different departments. The employees should work hard to reach their goal. ^^ What are the advantages and disadvantages of working in a team? Can you tell me about it later in class. See you! Teacher Nina This question seems to be the one that a person receives when he/she has a job interview. >> Correct! >> OR: This question seems to be asked from an interviewee. >> OR: This question seems to be asked during a job interview. The correct answer to the question is “I prefer working in a team and I am a team oriented person”, which is commonly expected by an employer. >> Correct! This is because when you work at a company, you have to work with others and it’s true that there is no work or job which doesn’t need team work. >> This is because when you work in a company, you have to work with others and it’s true that there is no work or job which doesn’t need team work. >> OR: This is because when you work in a company, you have to work with others and it’s true that there is no work or job which doesn\'t requires team work. You are not able to achieve company’s goals by working alone without supports from others. >> You can\'t achieve the company\'s goals by working alone without getting a support from others. >> OR: You can\'t reach the company\'s target by just merely working alone without getting a support from your co-workers. For example, in order to launch a new product, many stakeholders are involved: product planning, engineering, manufacturing, marketing, sales, PR, aftersales, etc. >> Correct! All functions and related people should closely work together and cooperate each other for the flawless launch. >> All the departments, even the other employees, should work closely together and cooperate for the flawless launch. >> OR: All the departments, even the other employees in the company, should work closely together and cooperate for the impeccable launch. However, being honest, I feel much comfortable and productive when I work independently. >> However, to be honest, I feel much comfortable and productive when I work independently. I like working hard, pursuing the perfectness, holding myself accountable for what I do without blaming others, and enjoying the feeling of the accomplishment >> I like working hard, pursuing perfection, holding myself accountable for what I do without blaming others, and enjoying the feeling of the accomplishment.

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