Essay prompt : Though texting is a valuable way of communicating, some people spend too much time se
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In the modern society, texting has been an important institution to communicate.
>> In modern society, \"texting\" has been an important method/mode of communication.
It has been performing an effective role in recent days that requires a rapid communication.
>> It has been performing an effective role in recent days that requires rapid communication.
However, people have been spending too much time on sending messages by phones.
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In addition, they have been communicating with others by texting instead of interacting with others face to face.
>> In addition, they have been communicating with others by texting instead of interacting face to face.
Texting, instead of interacting face to face can be a beneficial efficient institution to communicate though it can be a limited institution to communicate.
>> Texting, instead of interacting face to face can be a beneficial and efficient tool to communicate though it has limitations.
Sending messages by phones instead of interacting with others face to face can be a limited institution to communicate because of limited expressing emotions.
>> Sending messages by phones instead of interacting with others face to face can be a limited tool to communicate because of its limitations when expressing emotions.
People can\'t be capable to well express their feelings and emotions.
>> People are no longer capable of expressing their feelings and emotions well.
Rather, it can lead to a relation problem among people.
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On the other hand, interacting with others by meeting face to face can enhance the relationship among people.
>>Correct!^^
It can also be an institution to express one\'s feelings and emotions well because of using verbal and non-verbal emotions.
>> It can also be an institution to express one\'s feelings and emotions well with the use of verbal and non-verbal communications.
As a result, people can improve relationships and have balanced lives.
>>Correct!
Texting can be a beneficial institution, but can be an instrument to put a distance among others.
>>Texting can be a beneficial institution, but can be an instrument to put distance among others.
So people shouldn\'t spend too much time on texting.
>> So people shouldn\'t spend too much time texting.^^
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