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2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I was really pleased to enjoy the time with you on Friday, Shanee. Here is my essay for questions and answer for my homework. Q. Have you tried leaving a message to someone? Did he or she successfully deliver the message? A. Actually, I am not good at asking someone do my favor. Therefore, I rarely leave a message to someone. Instead, I usually find another way to contact him or her immediately, like leaving a text message or trying to find him or her to meet in person. I have the similar experience once. At that time, I asked my mother to inform my father to bring his umbrella before he leave my home and she informed well. I totally believe my mother. Here is my answer for homework. 1) B. 1940s. His 2) C. “Murphy’s Law”, 3) C. wrong, it will.” 4) C. comical 5) A. corollaries 6) D. sophisticated sayings 7) D. Correct as is 8) B. scope. Some See you on Monday! Enjoy your weekends!

강사 첨삭

How is it going AH RA?

Did you enjoy your lunch. I hope so!

Below are the corrections for your homework.

Thanks for doing it. See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,


I was really pleased to enjoy the time with you on Friday, Shanee.
Here is my essay for questions and answer for my homework.
>>> Here are my essay and answers for the homework you gave me.
Q. Have you tried leaving a message to someone? Did he or she successfully deliver the message?

A. Actually, I am not good at asking someone do my favor.

>>> Actually, I am not good at asking someone for some favors.

Therefore, I rarely leave a message to someone.

>>> Therefore, I rarely leave a message for someone.

Instead, I usually find another way to contact him or her immediately, like leaving a text message or trying to find him or her to meet in person.

>>> Correct!

I have the similar experience once.

>>> I have a similar experience once.

At that time, I asked my mother to inform my father to bring his umbrella before he leave my home and she informed well. I totally believe my mother.
>>> At that time, I asked my mother to inform my father to bring his umbrella before he leaves home and she was able to deliver the message. I completely trust my mother.


 Here is my answer for homework.
1) B. 1940s. His

>>> Correct!
 2) C. “Murphy’s Law”,

>>> A. “Murphy’s Law,”
3) C. wrong, it will.”

>>> Correct!
4) C. comical

>>> Correct!
 5) A. corollaries

>>> Correct!
 6) D. sophisticated sayings

>>> witty musings
 7) D. Correct as is

>>> Correct!
 8) B. scope. Some

>>> D. scope, while others

 See you on Monday! Enjoy your weekends!

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