Essay Question.

2017-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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When do you return call? when there is product defect or discrepancy in product specification. I will do return call. How often do you return calls to a client or customer? I rarely do return call to seller. Most of cases there is usually no problem about product. How is the quality of your compamy's service? I think that my company's service is better than any other related companies and at least as well as them. We have been taking the servey of customer satisfaction from the Ministry of the Interior and Safety every the first half year. Surveyor who is hired collects the satisfaction degree of service from 500 to 700 customers who regularly use our services. They answer a questionnaire consisting of about 50 item with 5 steps of satisfaction that is worst, bad, normal, good, and best. According to the result of survey, we can receive incentive among 50 to 200 percent of monthly pay.

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름]ki,

How are you?

I made several corrections but I have questions about some of your answers.

I\'ll just ask them during our class later tonight.

Thank you,

Amanda ^-^


When do you return call?

when there is product defect or discrepancy in product specification. I will do return call.

>> When there is a product defect or discrepancy in the product specification, I will make a return call.

How often do you return calls to a client or customer?
I rarely do return call to seller. Most of cases there is usually no problem about product.

>> I rarely make a return call to sellers because the products we purchase or order from them are usually in good condition.


How is the quality of your compamy\'s service?
I think that my company\'s service is better than any other related companies and at least as well as them.  

>> I think that my company\'s service is better than what other companies in the same field are offering or at the very least, the quality of our service is on par with them.


We have been taking the servey of customer satisfaction from the Ministry of the Interior and Safety every the first half year.

>> We take a customer satisfaction survey from the ministry of the Interior and Safety every 1st and 2nd quarter of the year.


Surveyor who is hired collects the satisfaction degree of service from 500 to 700 customers who regularly use our services.

*** I can\'t make a correction on this sentence yet because I need to clarify something with you first.


They answer a questionnaire consisting of about 50 item with 5 steps of satisfaction that is worst, bad, normal, good, and best.

>> They answer a questionnaire consisting of about 50 items with 5 steps of satisfaction ranging from worst, bad, normal, good, and best.


According to the result of survey, we can receive incentive among 50 to 200 percent of monthly pay.

>> Depending on the result of the survey, we can receive an incentive from 50 to 200 percent of our monthly pay.


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