Essay Question

2017-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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It is not related to today's lesson and just my answer to past lesson. I want to know correct sentences. Would you like to give me some corrections for me? What do you do when there is an emergency situation that you need to deal with but nobody is around to help? I will do my best efforts to solve the problem. At the time I will find another option to get other people. For example calling another person to come here for help. Do you troubleshoot the problem yourself? Yes, I do. I think that there is no one who can solve the problem on behalf of me. Do you consider servicing your customers even if it's your holiday? If It is an emergency situation. I will do my best to serve my customer. If it is no, then There is no reason that I should service my customer. but I could tell him how he could get a help

강사 첨삭


It is not related to today\'s lesson and just my answer to past lesson.

>> Its not related to today\'s lesson. It\'s my answer for our past lessons.


 I want to know correct sentences. Would you like to give me some corrections for me?
>> I would like you to check my answers.  

What do you do when there is an emergency situation that you need to deal with but nobody is around to help?
I will do my best efforts to solve the problem. At the time I will find another option to get other people. For example calling another person to come here for help.
>> I will do my best efforts to solve the problem first on my own, but if I can\'t deal with it by myself, I will find another option, like calling another person for help.

Do you troubleshoot the problem yourself?
Yes, I do. I think that there is no one who can solve the problem on behalf of me.

>> Yes, I do. I think that there is no one who can solve the problem except myself.


 Do you consider servicing your customers even if it\'s your holiday?
If It is an emergency situation. I will do my best to serve my customer. If it is no, then There is no reason that I should service my customer. but I could tell him how he could get a help

>> If It is an emergency situation, I will do my best to serve the customer. If it is not, then there is no reason for me to do so, but I could tell him how he could get help.

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