Essay Question

2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hello, teacher! Good afternoon. Did you enjoy your lunch? :) Actually, I really tried my best to fix my pronunciation and grammar but it is not easy for me. Would you give me some tips? Here is my answer for essay questions. Q. what will you do if you have a subordinate who has an attitude problem? Will you send him off to another department? A. My answer is definitely "No". If I pick the person as a right person, that would be also my fault. Therefore, I will endure that person if I have a subordinate with bad attitude. But I will do my best to persuade him or her to be gentle and nice. That would be my best try for my working life. And here is my answers for today's homework. 1. softer 2. laziest 3. silliest 4. brighter 5. loudest 6. most interesting 7. better 8. more difficult 9. cheapest 10 funniest Thanks to you, I really enjoy my time studying with you. Thank you so much for inspiring me a lot everyday! Enjoy your day and see you tomorrow! :)

강사 첨삭

How are you doing AH RA?

Below are the corrections for your essay.

And I want to commend you for getting all the correct answers on your homework.

As for some tips, you can check the following:

1. Make a commitment

 

Learning English grammar needs a lot of motivation. Once you are ready to begin studying, stick by it until the end.

 

2. Keep a grammar book at your disposal

 

Keeping an English grammar book will allow you to revise what you have learnt in class, as well as

force you to learn grammar as often as you can.

 

3. Utilize a grammar app

 

Nowadays, everyone has a smartphone. Make use of it. Download a dictionary app and a grammar app.

You can use it while commuting or in your free time.

 

4. Practice every day

English grammar mastery also involves the acquisition of five critical skills sets (reading, thinking, listening, speaking and writing). Seek every opportunity in your daily activities to practice these skills.

 

5. Learn new words

Learn as much vocabulary as you can to be used

both for speaking and writing activities.

 

Keep a notebook for new words. Every day, everywhere, you will see new words. When you write them

down, you have a record of them that you can use again. Set a target for yourself to learn and use

10 or 20 new words every day.

 

6. Read more in English

 This is one step you can’t skip if you want to get better at grammar. Reading helps you to see how the grammar works. [이름]ose something that you are interested in and read about it. Find books, magazines or newspaper articles that suit your current level of English. You will find new words every time you read, you will start to understand the ‘tone’ of the writer and how they deal with grammar aspects. Whenever you find something that seems different to you, Google. Indeed, when you are grammatically incorrect, the correct sentences could sound strange to your ears.

 

7. Listen in English

Don’t think of learning English as happening only in the classroom. You can learn English all day, very day by looking at and listening to what is happening around you, on the street, on the bus or

train, in the supermarket. Keep your mind, ears and eyes open and you will be amazed how much English, and the culture of the people using it, you will pick up.

 

8. Try and communicate in English with other people

The more time you spend practicing conversational English,

the better you would start understanding grammar rules, for example, tenses, regular verbs, irregular verbs, pronouns.

 

9. Watch English movies or TV series

Watch English movie and series with subtitles. Note the usage of language, tenses, subjects and

verbs - the three areas people usually mess up in.

 

10. Write more in English

 English grammar improvement also involves writing practice.

 

11. Understand the logic behind a grammar rule 

There is always a logic behind a grammar rule. Note down all the rules you erred in previously and figure out why a particular word or sentence is the way it is. Once you got to know its logic, you would never make that mistake again.


There are so many of them and I hope these will help.

See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Hello, teacher! Good afternoon.
Did you enjoy your lunch? :)

 Actually, I really tried my best to fix my pronunciation and grammar but it is not easy for me. Would you give me some tips?

Here is my answer for essay questions.

Q. what will you do if you have a subordinate who has an attitude problem? Will you send him off to another department?

A. My answer is definitely \"No\".

>>> Correct!

If I pick the person as a right person, that would be also my fault.

>>> If I was the one who hired or [이름]se that person, that would be also my fault.

Therefore, I will endure that person if I have a subordinate with bad attitude.

>>> Therefore, I will endure working with a subordinate who has a bad attitude.

But I will do my best to persuade him or her to be gentle and nice.

>>> Correct!

That would be my best try for my working life.
>>> That would be the best thing I could do in my entire career. [I am a little confused here. I hope I got your point correctly.^^]


 And here is my answers for today\'s homework.
1. softer

>>> Correct!
 2. laziest

>>> Correct!
3. silliest

>>> Correct!
4. brighter

>>> Correct!
 5. loudest

>>> Correct!
6. most interesting

>>> Correct!
7. better

>>> Correct!
8. more difficult

>>> Correct!
9. cheapest

>>> Correct!
10 funniest

>>> Correct!

 Thanks to you, I really enjoy my time studying with you. Thank you so much for inspiring me a lot everyday! Enjoy your day and see you tomorrow! :)

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