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Kindly go over the sentences below. See you in class.
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Q. How frequent do you receive advertising attachments in your e-mail account? Do you consider them as spam?
A. Well, I rarely receive the spam e-mail and advertising attachments.
>>> Well, I rarely receive spam e-mails and advertising attachments.
Actually, most of my e-mails are regarding of my internal works and I usually communicate internal workers, not customers.
>>> Actually, most of my e-mails are regarding my internal works and I usually communicate with internal workers not customers.
However, I still receive some e-mails with attachments, but it is mostly about requests from my customers.
>>> However, I still receive e-mails with attachments, but they are mostly about requests from my customers.
If I received the advertising attachments, I could not see and check them because it would be classified as spam e-mail automatically.
>>> When I receive advertising attachments, I can\'t see and check them since they are automatically classified as spam e-mails.
Sometimes, I miss some e-mails because of theses reasons.
>>> Sometimes, I miss some e-mails because of this reason. [You indicated only one reason.]
However, if I received the e-mail attached some advertisements, I would be regard that e-mails as a spam e-mail and not open it anymore.
>>> However, if I received some e-mails with attached advertisements, I would regard those e-mails as spam and never open them anymore.
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