Essay Questions
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Q. If you\'re a sales person, how will you offer your new products to your clients? Are you going to meet them in person or you will just leave your contact number for them to call you?
A. If I am a sales person, I will meet my clients and customers in person and introduce and show my new product to them.
>>> Correct!
Because I believe that having a conversation in person is much better than communicating with someone through internet or telephone.
>>> Because I believe that having a conversation in person is much better than communicating with someone through the internet or telephone.
If we meet and enjoy our time together, we could get much closer and become familiar with each other.
>>> Correct!
Then, it might be really helpful for my sales performances.
>>> >>> Correct!v
After meeting them in person, I will try my best to contact them through e-mail and telephone not to forget me and my product.
>>> After meeting them in person, I will try my best to contact them through e-mails and telephone so they won\'t forget me or my product.
In my opinion, good impression is the best way to improve the sales.
>>> OR: In my opinion, leaving a good impression on my customers is the best way to improve my sales.
Therefore, I will meet them in person if it\'s not an unavoidable situation like people who live in so far away from distance.
>>> Therefore, I will meet them in person as much as I can.
And this is my answers for my homework yesterday.
1. B) is used
>>> Correct!
2. A) treated
>>> Correct!
3. D) with
>>> Correct!
4. A) In addition
>>> E Because of
5. C) that
>>> Correct!
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