Essay: restaurants you go to regularily

2013-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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There are a few restaurants where I often go to eat at. One of them is the typical Korean restaurant “Sandle-Ae” that serves a wide variety of Korean foods. The main dish is steamed rice that is served in a heated stone bowl and it comes with vegetables, bean curd, boiled pork, Korean pan cake, crab ripened with soy bean sauce, noodles, etc. The good thing when you go to such typical Korean restaurants is that you can taste the various kinds of side dishes. But my daughter’s taste is different from ours, so we often have a conflict and a hard time deciding menu when we eat out. She loves to eat fast foods like pizza and hamburgers that would do her more harm than good. There is general belief among Koreans that people should eat rice than wheat. Almost all Koreans have been raised from the beginning and educated as such to eat rice. Due to the fact that my body and stomach have been used to digesting rice, I have some trouble digesting wheat based foods like bread.

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Hello Sir [이름]^^ Wow! I would like to visit that restaurant. I know that the food is really delicious. I hope someday I will be able to visit your country. How about the price? Is it expensive? Tell me more about it in class. Thank you for sharing your ideas today. Take Care! Teacher Nina There are a few restaurants where I often go to eat at. >> There are a few restaurants where I often go to eat. >> OR: There are a few restaurants where I often go to dine. One of them is the typical Korean restaurant “Sandle-Ae” that serves a wide variety of Korean foods. >> Correct! The main dish is steamed rice that is served in a heated stone bowl and it comes with vegetables, bean curd, boiled pork, Korean pan cake, crab ripened with soy bean sauce, noodles, etc. >> Did you mean: The main dish is steamed rice that is served in a heated stone bowl and it comes with vegetables, bean curd, boiled pork, Korean pancake, crab marinated with soy bean sauce, noodles, etc. >> Or did you mean: The main dish is steamed rice that is served in sizzling bowl and it comes with vegetables, bean curd, boiled pork, Korean pancake, crab marinated with soy bean sauce, noodles, etc. The good thing when you go to such typical Korean restaurants is that you can taste the various kinds of side dishes. >> Correct! >> OR: The good thing when you go to such typical Korean restaurants is that you can taste the different kinds of side dishes. But my daughter’s taste is different from ours, so we often have a conflict and a hard time deciding menu when we eat out. >> But my daughter\'s taste is different from ours, so we often have a conflict and a hard time deciding what menu when we are going to eat. >> OR: But my daughter\'s taste is different from ours, so we often have a conflict and a hard time deciding what menu when we are going to choose. She loves to eat fast foods like pizza and hamburgers that would do her more harm than good. >> Correct! >> OR: She loves to eat fast foods such as pizza and hamburgers that would harm her. There is general belief among Koreans that people should eat rice than wheat. >> There is a general belief among Koreans that people should eat rice than wheat. Almost all Koreans have been raised from the beginning and educated as such to eat rice. >> Most Koreans have been raised and educated to eat rice. >> OR: Most Koreans were raised from the start and educated to eat rice. Due to the fact that my body and stomach have been used to digesting rice, I have some trouble digesting wheat based foods like bread. >> Due to the fact that my body and stomach have been used to digest rice, I have some trouble digesting wheat-based foods like bread.

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