ESSAY: Some people argue that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while

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The issue of early formal education for children would be a hugely controversial topic and can cause heated debate amongst people who hold strong views to this issue.

>>> The issue of early formal education for children is a huge controversial topic and can cause heated debates amongst people who hold strong views on this issue.

I completely believe that education for children should start as soon as possible.

>>> Correct.
 Some people argue that early education is likely to cause waste money.

>>> However, some people argue that early education is just a waste of money. 

If children get pressure about learning from their greedy parents, those who do not have willness to learn are able to become loss of academic interest.

>>> When children get pressured by their greedy parents to study hard, those who do not have a string will may lose interest in pursuing academic success.

To give an example, some of kids who had been went through early education at foreign country could not get great achievement from their academy.

>>> To give you an example, some kids who went through early education in a foreign country could not attain great academic achievements.

That\'s why people concern about early formal education.

>>> That\'s why a number of people are concerned about early formal education.
 However, some people hold the view that learning as early as possilbe is benefit for children for lead to a individual growth.

>>>  On the other hand, a number of people believe that learning as early as possilbe is beneficial for children \'s individual growth.

In other words, there is a strong relation between early education and personal experience.

>>> In other words, there is a strong relationship between early education and personal experience.

Children who went through a variety of practices can easily excel in their fields of works and achieve

>>> Children who went through a variety of practices can easily excel in their field of study and achieve great things.