ESSAY: Tell me about a positive experience with learning English.

2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I've studied English for quite long time like other Koreans,even though my English is still poor. Sometimes Iam so frustrated because of my poor English. But ,whenever My English is helpful in abroad, I think learning English was my good decision.Sometimes I had to talk to some foreigners on the phone. In that case, phone English was so useful for me. And I think Learning foreign language is also learning a different culture. So, I like learning foreign lagnuages Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ma\'am [이름]! Thank you for your love in learning English. I can always feel your dedication during our classes so I commend you for that. Keep it up! ~Kelly^^ I\'ve studied English for quite long time like other Koreans,even though my English is still poor. >> Like other Koreans, I\'ve studied English for quite a long time, however, my English ability is still poor.Sometimes I am so frustrated because of my poor English.>> Correct. But ,whenever My English is helpful in abroad, I think learning English was my good decision. >> But, whenever my English skill is helpful when going abroad, I think that I made a good decision. Sometimes I had to talk to some foreigners on the phone. >> Correct.In that case, phone English was so useful for me. >> Correct.And I think Learning foreign language is also learning a different culture.>> And I think that learning a foreign language is also like learning a different culture. So, I like learning foreign lagnuages. >> Correct.Thank you. >> Correct.

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