Essay: the longest distance you've traveled to

It was probably the longest distance when I traveled to Egypt and Lebanon. It was part of my business trip about twenty years ago when I worked in the previous company. Looking back, it was really tough to travel to several countries such as the U.A.E., Turkey, Lebanon and Egypt at once for just a week. The budget for the trip was not enough, so I had to shorten my itinerary that forced me to stay in each country only for two days. Literary, I had to re-pack my baggage to move to another country as soon as I arrived and unpacked my luggage in a country. Although I do not remember exactly how long it took me to get there, I believe the flight time only was longer than 20 hours from Seoul to Dubai. I rode a Carmel to get to the site of the pyramids in Egypt and I once fell down from the Carmel. In Dubai, the hotel I stayed was amazing. There was a beach in front of the hotel and I could enjoy swimming in the sunset because you cannot swim during the day time owing to the hot weatheR.

Hello there Sir [이름]! Thank you very much for sharing this spectacular experience of yours! I appreciate that you mentioned a lot of things. ^^ I hope to visit those countries too! How was your experience the first time you rode a camel? I dreamt of riding on a camel since I was young. You did a marvelous job! Do you buy some memorabilia or souvenirs when you travel? You can share your answers in class. Please go over the corrections below. See you!Teacher Nina   It was probably the longest distance when I traveled to Egypt and Lebanon. >> Correct! >> OR: Probably, the longest distance I travelled was when I went to Egypt and Lebanon. It was part of my business trip about twenty years ago when I worked in the previous company. >> It was a part of my business trp about twenty years ago, when I worked in the previous company. >> OR: It was a part of my business trip when I worked in my previous company twenty years ago. Looking back, it was really tough to travel to several countries such as the U.A.E., Turkey, Lebanon and Egypt at once for just a week. >> Looking back, it was really tough to travel to several countries such as U.A.E., Turkey, Lebanon and Egypt at once for just a week. The budget for the trip was not enough, so I had to shorten my itinerary that forced me to stay in each country only for two days. >> Correct! Literary, I had to re-pack my baggage to move to another country as soon as I arrived and unpacked my luggage in a country. >> Did you mean: Literary, I had to pack my baggage again to move to another country and unpacked my things as soon as I arrive in my destination. Although I do not remember exactly how long it took me to get there, I believe the flight time only was longer than 20 hours from Seoul to Dubai. >> Although I do not exactly remember how long it took me to get there, I believe that the travelling time was longer from Seoul to Dubai. >> OR: Although I don\' t exactly remember how long it took me to get there, I believe that the travelling time took more than twenty hours from Seoul to Dubai. I rode a Carmel to get to the site of the pyramids in Egypt and I once fell down from the Carmel. >> I rode a camel to get to the site of the pyramids in Egypt and I fell down from the camel once. >> OR: I rode a camel and fell down once to reach the site of the pyramids in Egypt. In Dubai, the hotel I stayed was amazing. >> In Dubai, the hotel where I stayed was amazing. There was a beach in front of the hotel and I could enjoy swimming in the sunset because you cannot swim during the day time owing to the hot weatheR. >> There was a beach in front of the hotel and I could enjoy swimming in the sunset because you can\'t do it during daytime owing to the hot weather. >> OR: There was a beach in front of the hotel and I could enjoy swimming in the sunset. It is because you can\'t do it during daytime owing to the hot weather.