Essay: the most important skill

2013-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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Although it requires a man to have a lot of skills to succeed in the world today, the most important skill needed is the interpersonal skill, I think. Today's work environment is a different world than in the past. Employers do not look for employees who work alone. They seek team members who arrive at decisions based on a collaborative effort of the entire group. To create the teamwork, employees need good interpersonal skills and such an employee who has the skills is highly appreciated. A company is like an enormous clock in which small inner gears are combined and it only works if all the little cogs mesh together. We should listen more than we speak and appreciate others and show gratitude. These are basic steps to learn the good interpersonal skills.

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Hi there Sir [이름]^^ Thank you for sending this in.^^ A good team results to a great company. Interpersonal skills is really important. We should always listen and accept comments in a positive way to have a better relationship at work. I think having good skils is a plus factor to a person. Let us talk more about this in class. See you!Teacher Nina Although it requires a man to have a lot of skills to succeed in the world today, the most important skill needed is the interpersonal skill, I think. >> Although it requires a man to have a lot of skills to succeed in the world today, I think that the most important skill needed is interpersonal skills. Today\'s work environment is a different world than in the past. >> Correct! Employers do not look for employees who work alone. >> Correct! OR >> Employers do not look for employees who works by himself/herself. They seek team members who arrive at decisions based on a collaborative effort of the entire group. >> They seek their team members who arrive at decision making based on a collaborative effort of the entire group. OR >> They seek their team members who arrive at decision making based on a collaborative effort of the whole group. To create the teamwork, employees need good interpersonal skills and such an employee who has the skills is highly appreciated. >> To create a good teamwork, employees need to have good interpersonal skills and sucj an employee who has the skills is highly appreciated. A company is like an enormous clock in which small inner gears are combined and it only works if all the little cogs mesh together. >> Correct! We should listen more than we speak and appreciate others and show gratitude. >> Correct! These are basic steps to learn the good interpersonal skills. >> These are the basic steps to learn good interpersonal skills.

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